This is the final shooting script for "Patient Zero," our entry in the 2009 Almost Famous Film Festival. We had 2 days to create a 1-5 minute film with the following elements:

* Theme: A significant loss

* Someone opening or closing a backpack.

* The line "This changes everything."

The script was written in about 40 minutes. Enjoy!

 

 

 

 

 

 

               FADE IN

 

 

 

               EXT. CONDO - DAY

 

               PAM ZENDRA exits a condo with BRAD FORNETTI, post-coital.

               They kiss.

 

               SALLY McGEE storms up to them.

 

                                   SALLY

                         Brad!  How could you?

 

               Brad and Pam are surprised.

 

                                   BRAD

                         Who the f --

 

                                   SALLY

                         -- After everything we've been

                         through!

 

                                   BRAD

                             (to Pam)

                         Baby, I don't know who this psycho

                         -

 

               BAM!  Sally shoots him in the head.

 

               Pam SCREAMS.

 

               Sally turns the gun on Pam, who runs around the corner.

 

               FRANK BROWN drives by.

 

                                   PAM

                         Help!  Please help me!

 

               Frank SCREECHES to a halt.

 

                                   FRANK

                         Get in!

 

               She gets in.  They drive off.

 

                                   PAM

                         Oh, thank you...

 

                                   FRANK

                         You're welcome, Pam.

 

                                   PAM

                         Wh... how do you know my name?

 

               Frank gives her a handgun.

 

                                   FRANK

                         Everyone knows your name.

 

                                   PAM

                         Will you please let me out?

 

                                   FRANK

                         I can't.  Not yet.

 

                                   PAM

                         What the hell is going on here?

 

                                   FRANK

                         My name is Frank Brown.  I've come

                         to save a lot of people.

 

               They stop at a light.  Frank locks the door.

 

                                   PAM

                         I have no idea what you're talking

                         about.  Let me out.

 

                                   FRANK

                         The man you just slept with was

                         Brad Fornetti.  You two just

                         created a super-virus that will

                         eventually kill 2 billion women.

 

               Pam points the gun at him.

 

                                   PAM

                         You're insane.  Let me out!

 

                                   FRANK

                         The world spent half a trillion

                         dollars to send me back to this

                         moment.  We traced the virus to

                         you.  It was created right there in

                         that bedroom.  There is no

                         ambiguity.  There is no question.

 

               She COCKS the gun.

 

                                   PAM

                         You have 3 seconds.

 

                                   FRANK

                         No, I have several minutes.

 

               She lowers the gun a little.

 

                                   PAM

                         Can you prove any of this?

 

               He reaches in the back seat and hands her a back pack.  She

               opens in and sees a screen inside.

 

                                   FRANK

                         Men are carriers, but it's women

                         that are killed by it.  The virus

                         was just created in your cervex,

                         and you'll become infectious in

                         less than 5 minutes.

 

               She closes the back pack.

 

                                   PAM

                         So what do you want from me?

 

                                   FRANK

                         It's not what I want.  It's what we

                         all need.  We need you to die.

 

               Pam points the gun at him again.

 

                                   PAM

                         I have a good life!  I have

                         friends!  I haven't hurt anyone!  I

                         don't deserve this!

 

                                   FRANK

                         I know.  But neither did those 2

                         billion women.  You owe it to them.

 

 

 

               EXT. DESERT - SAME

 

               They continue driving.

 

                                   PAM

                         What if I don't let you kill me?

 

                                   FRANK

                         I'm not going to kill you.  You're

                         going to kill yourself.

 

               Beat.

 

                                   PAM

                         You can't make me.

 

                                   FRANK

                         I know.  You have to make the

                         decision yourself.

 

                                   PAM

                         Why couldn't you have just told me

                         to use protection?  Or deuche? Or

                         not have sex with anyone for the

                         rest of my life? 

 

                                   FRANK

                         We've calculated every possible

                         past and future.  This is the only

                         way.  You killed all those women...

                         and you're the only one who can

                         save them.

 

               He pulls to a stop. 

 

                                   PAM (CONT'D)

                         What are you doing?

 

               He exits the car, grabs a tank of gas from the trunk.

 

                                   FRANK

                         I've been in a hermetically sealed

                         environment my entire life.

                         Meeting you means I've been

                         infected.

 

               He douses himself in gasoline.

 

                                   FRANK (CONT'D)

                         I know you'll do the right thing,

                         Pam.

 

               He lights himself on fire, SCREAMS.

 

               Pam GASPS, starts shaking and crying. 

 

                                   PAM

                         This changes everything.

 

               She looks at the keys in the ignition. She looks in the back

               pack again, then out to Frank's body.

 

               With great sadness and resignation, she exits the car, walks

               to the fire, puts the gun to her head.

 

                                                              FADE OUT.

 

 

 

               BANG.

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